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TODD CRISPIN Crispin gives him a "You lucky son of a bitch" look. TODD TODD CRISPIN
Todd looks at his watch. TODD Crispin raises his hand and snaps his fingers loud. A perky young WAITRESS immediately appears. CRISPIN
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TODD The waitress writes it down, then turns to Todd and smiles. WAITRESS
TODD Todd looks back to Mr. Crispin who is leering at him. CRISPIN
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CRISPIN TODD CRISPIN TODD CRISPIN The waitress brings their drinks. CRISPIN TODD CRISPIN TODD
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CRISPIN Todd hasn't even started on his. TODD
Crispin snaps his fingers, holds up his glass and one finger. CRISPIN TODD CRISPIN TODD
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Crispin waves his hand. CRISPIN
Crispin is getting bombed. TODD
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TODD The waitress brings Crispin a fresh drink. As she's about to take the old one he grabs it and dumps the contents into the new one overflowing it. CRISPIN
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Todd finishes his drink and nods sadly. TODD
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The new drinks arrive. TODD
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TODD Crispin fishes in his pocket for his wallet, then snaps his fingers. CRISPIN
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Crispin hands her a twenty. CRISPIN
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Crispin points at Todd's drink. CRISPIN
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Todd takes a last gulp and stands. He follows Mr. Crispin to the door. EXT. STEAK & ALE - DAY Mr. Crispin and Todd come out the door of the restaurant. Crispin is clearly staggering. They start to head in different directions, Crispin weaving his way toward a huge, gold Cadillac Fleetwood. CRISPIN
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Crispin gets into his car, starts it up, backs out at 30 mph, comes to a screeching halt, then peels out of the parking lot in a cloud of blue burnt rubber smoke. He pulls out onto the road, having just gone through a stop sign, nearly gets into an accident, then screams away up the road at seventy. Todd stands in the cloud of blue smoke and waves the smoke away from his face. INT. TODD'S CAR - DAY He gets into his car, looks at his briefcase sadly, then tosses it in back. He opens the glove box and takes out the bottle. TODD He downs the remainder of the bottle in a single gulp. He tosses the bottle back into the glove box. TODD Todd sighs, pulls up to the stop sign, stops, looks both ways, then slowly pulls out onto the road. EXT. VACANT LOT - DAY Todd sits on the hill of the vacant lot looking wistfully around. He reaches down, digs out a handful of dirt, crumbles it around in his hand and lets it slip through his fingers. At the bottom of the hill a red Ford Escort pulls up behind Todd's car. Laura gets out and walks up the hill. Todd smiles as he watches her approach. LAURA
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Laura sits down on the ground beside him. She looks him in the eyes. LAURA
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Todd considers for a second, then... TODD
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TODD Laura leans over and kisses him. It's a long kiss. Todd's hands are in his lap. Finally, he reaches up for her and that's when she pulls away. Todd is left with his hands in the air. Laura walks down the hill, gets in her car drives away. Todd watches her go, then sighs. TODD Todd shrugs. INT. DECADE 31 OFFICE - DAY Todd sits at his desk drinking a cup of coffee and telling Eileen the story. TODD EILEEN TODD EILEEN
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Todd seriously considers this. EXT. MAIN STREET - DAY Todd walks up Main Street with a thoughtful expression, his brow furrowed. He goes in the opposite direction he took earlier. He passes The Huron Furniture Company and Dick and Chris are hanging around out front smoking cigarettes. They see Todd and are taken aback. DICK
TODD Dick and Chris look at each other. DICK
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He pantomimes smoking a joint. TODD CHRIS
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Todd keeps walking. TODD
Chris and Dick both look at each other and nod their heads. CHRIS
& DICK INT. BETTER BUSINESS EQUIPMENT - DAY Todd stands in the office supply store waiting patiently for Ed to get off the telephone. ED Ed hangs up. ED
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TODD ED Todd considers this very seriously. EXT. THE HOLMAN HOUSE - DUSK The Holman's family house is a small, wooden house a bit out of town, set back in the woods. The large front yard is very well-tended with flower beds everywhere. The many species of flowers are all dying now. Todd's car sits in the front drive behind a ten year old, yellow Chevy Nova. EXT. HOLMAN'S BACKYARD - DUSK The Holman's backyard is quite large, surrounded by thick woods. The last golden rays of sunlight filter through the colorful autumn leaves. There are a multitude of fruit trees, plants, shrubs, vines and flowers. MR. HOLMAN is 66, has white hair, is in pretty good shape (with a little gut and a red nose) and is very busy pruning trees. MRS. HOLMAN is 61, has brown hair streaked with white, is attractive and slim and looks like she's worked hard her whole life. She is making cuttings of her flowers. They both wear work gloves and windbreakers and are busy as bees. Todd follows behind one then the other and is made to hold things as they talk. MR.
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H Todd considers it all, then shakes his head and sighs deeply. EXT. THE BLIND PIG SALOON - NIGHT The Blind Pig Saloon is a storefront bar on Main Street with the cryptic announcement above the door, "World Headquarters." We can hear the sound of a televised basketball game coming from within. SPORTSCASTER
(V.O.) INT. BLIND PIG - NIGHT The Blind Pig is a small sports bar with a zillion photographs on the walls and a canoe hanging from the ceiling. There are a multitude of TV's all around. At a long table in the back, all by himself, sits Todd holding a mug of beer. He has a pitcher of beer beside him with six unused mugs. Todd looks around expectantly, sighs and looks back at the game. TODD
The Pistons score a basket. TODD Todd downs his beer and pours another one. TODD Todd nods with some assurance and sips his beer. He looks up and Chris and Dick come walking up. The both look buzzed. TODD CHRIS DICK TODD CHRIS TODD DICK Dick and Chris take off their jackets,
pull up chairs and pour themselves beers. EILEEN Chris and Dick nod. TODD Todd holds a chair for her and she sets down her drink and takes off her coat. EILEEN TODD EILEEN TODD EILEEN She sips her Martini. Ed and his very pregnant wife, JEANINE, come walking up. Todd stands and smiles. TODD JEANINE Todd and Jeanine kiss. TODD Ed and Todd shake hands. ED TODD ED Aly and the cute waitress, Sherry, from Steak & Ale both come walking in looking great. Chris and Dick check them out. ALY SHERRY Todd stands and hugs Sherry, then Aly. He whispers to her. TODD ALY TODD He pours them both a beer. Just then Mr. and Mrs. Holman come in. Todd sees them and waves. TODD
Mr. and Mrs. Holman walk up and everybody says hi. Todd looks toward the door expectantly, then looks away. He sighs and shakes his head. He looks back at the door and there is Laura. Todd grins happily. Laura sees him and starts over. Laura sits down beside Todd. LAURA TODD Hi. I'm glad you came. LAURA TODD LAURA TODD LAURA TODD LAURA TODD LAURA TODD LAURA Todd looks at Laura for a long moment like he's going to say something, but doesn't. He's said it all. He puts his arm around Laura's shoulder and squeezes her. She snuggles up next to him. Todd looks up the table and sees all of his friends smiling and laughing together. Todd grins contentedly, then glances up at the TV. SPORTSCASTER
(V.O.) CLOSE-UP TELEVISION SET We see a day, exterior, aerial shot of the Los Angeles Sports Arena, then a variety of shots of L.A.: downtown, Melrose, Hollywood Boulevard, then finally... |
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