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EXT. ALLEY (COSMO ST.) - NIGHT Cosmo St. is a dark, thin alley-like street lined with garbage dumpsters that runs one block between Hollywood Blvd. and Selma Ave. It is cold and raining. Between two dumpsters sits a large, cardboard, washing machine box covered with garbage bags. Beside it sits a stuffed shopping cart. INT. WASHING MACHINE BOX - NIGHT Inside the box lies Todd, curled up in his yellow blanket, asleep and shaking. He is having a nightmare and mumbling to himself. TODD Suddenly, the top of the box is ripped open and dirty hands reach in and grab Todd. He gasps as he is jolted awake and dragged out of the box. He clutches his blanket. The perpetrators are two, filthy, bearded BUMS. BUM
#1 BUM
#2 They push Todd around, then punch him a several times. Todd falls to the wet pavement with a bloody nose. They pounce on him and rip through his pockets. They find a few dollars and some change, a pint bottle of scotch and Todd's disposable fountain pen. Bum #2 opens the cap and ink drips out. He sneers and whips the pen across the alley. BUM
#2 They stand Todd up and kick him in the ass. Todd stumbles, then trudges away up the alley, his faced smeared with blood. He wipes his face with his blanket. EXT. TODD'S EX-APARTMENT BUILDING - DAY A gray Buick LeMans with a Thrify Car Rental bumper sticker pulls up in front of Todd's old building. Laura and Mr. Holman get out of the car. As they approach they check the place out. MR.
H They step up to the door of apartment one and knock. Laura has a hopeful expression. The door is answered by dark-haired fellow wearing only gym shorts. He is the TENANT (formerly the PROSPECTIVE TENANT). The apartment behind him is now full of books. TENANT LAURA
TENANT He disappears into the apartment. Laura and Mr. Holman look at each other hopefully. The Tenant returns a moment later with about ten envelopes in his hand. He hands them to Laura. TENANT
Mr. Holman and Laura look at the envelopes and they're all addressed to Todd Holman. Three from the Gas Company, three from Pacific Bell, three from the DWP. LAURA TENANT
That word doesn't strike Laura or Mr. Holman well. MR.
H TENANT
LAURA
TENANT
MR.
H The Tenant points to his right. TENANT
Laura and Mr. Holman both look totally blank. MR
H TENANT
CLOSE-UP - PHOTO OF TODD This is a pocket-sized photograph in a wallet of a smiling, happy Todd. INT. HOLLYWOOD POLICE STATION - DAY Laura and Mr. Holman sit in front of a desk where a DETECTIVE is filling out a form on his keyboard. DETECTIVE
LAURA
DETECTIVE
Mr. Holman reaches into his pocket and removes a hotel key. On the plastic tag it reads... MR.
H The Detective looks at the key and types in the information. DETECTIVE
MR.
H DETECTIVE
Laura and Mr. Holman stand and shrug hopelessly. LAURA
MR.
H DETECTIVE
Laura and Mr. Holman look at each other. A possibility. LAURA
The Detective reaches into his drawer and takes out a map of Hollywood. DETECTIVE
EXT. WILCOX AT SANTA MONICA BLVD. - DAY Laura and Mr. Holman step up to the corner of Wilcox and Santa Monica Blvd., look at each other, shrug and head off in different directions, Laura heading west, Mr. Holman heading east. They both have pictures of Todd in their hands. DETECTIVE
(V.O.) EXT. SANTA MONICA BLVD. AT BRONSON ST. - DAY Mr. Holman stops and shows the picture to a black, homeless guy on a bus-stop bench. The guy shakes his head. EXT. SANTA MONICA BLVD. AT HIGHLAND AVE. - DAY Laura is in front of a doughnut shop on the corner of Santa Monica and Highland speaking to a group of six black and Latino guys and showing the picture. They all shake their heads. EXT. SANTA MONICA BLVD. AT WESTERN AVE. - DAY Mr. Holman gets to the busy corner of Santa Monica and Western and asks everybody around, which is a lot of black and Latino people. One and all either don't stop or shake their heads. Mr. Holman walks north on Western, past crummy-looking furniture stores and pawn shops, then turns left on Lexington. DETECTIVE
(V.O.) EXT. LABREA AND LEXINGTON AVE. - DAY Laura turns off of LaBrea onto the side street of Lexington. There are few people on this street and Laura walks fast. The sweater she's wearing is starting to suffocate her. DETECTIVE
(V.O.) EXT. LEXINGTON AT SEWARD ST. - DAY Laura and Mr. Holman meet up in front of the costume shop on the corner of Lexington and Seward. They both shake their heads. They walk a block north, then each head back in the direction that they just came from. FADE OUT: FADE IN: EXT. HOLLYWOOD SIGN (TIME LAPSE) - DAWN We are looking east along the Hollywood sign with Griffith Park Observatory in front of us. The sun rises behind the mountains. Our view moves down to the streets of Hollywood. EXT. HOLLYWOOD BLVD. AT CAHUENGA - MORNING People wait for the bus, panhandlers ask for money, people step up to the display of magazines at the newsstand. Our view moves up Cahuenga Ave., past the newsstand, past the Tandoori Indian restaurant, past the nameless, shabby door fronts and stops at one deep door front that is filled with two feet of garbage. The garbage pile begins to move, then someone sits up from beneath all the refuse. It's Todd clutching his blanket around his shoulders, dried blood smeared around his nose, his teeth chattering. He blinks his eyes at the morning sun, then sees a pedestrian walking past. TODD The pedestrian doesn't stop. INT. PIZZA DELI - DAY Mr. Holman and Laura sit at a white plastic table dismally eating slices of pizza on paper plates at the Pizza Deli on Hollywood and Cahuenga. The restaurant has a white, sanitary, hospital feel to it, although it's filled with Hollywood nutballs. LAURA MR.
H LAURA
MR.
H LAURA DISSOLVE TO: EXT. CINERAMA DOME - DUSK There is a line forming around the Cinerama Dome for the first evening show. In the foreground across the street, Laura and Mr. Holman step up to each other. They both frown and shake their heads. Without a word they've now given up. They walk west up Sunset Blvd. LAURA MR.
H The arrive at the corner of Sunset and Wilcox. Laura points to her left, up Wilcox. LAURA
Mr. Holman points to the right at the Wilcox Liquor store. MR.
H They cross Wilcox at the light. INT. WILCOX LIQUOR STORE - DUSK Laura and Mr. Holman enter the little liquor store. Behind the counter sits a middle-aged Korean CLERK. The small store is separated down the center by one aisle of food products. Laura and Mr. Holman go to the cooler in back and get cans of soda. At the counter Mr. Holman instinctively pulls out the photo of Todd and shows it to the Korean Clerk. MR.
H CLERK MR.
H CLERK
MR.
H CLERK Mr. Holman pulls out three ones. The Korean Clerk makes change, then loudly snaps open a paper bag. He puts the two cans in the bag. Mr. Holman wearily removes the cans from the bag, hands one can to Laura and they leave. A moment later Todd steps around the center aisle holding a Miller Tall-Boy and a package of bologna. He sets the items on the counter, then reaches into all his pockets and pulls out change. The Clerk quickly counts the money, then looks up at Todd. CLERK Todd pushes away the package of bologna. The Clerk pushes it back. CLERK Todd nods, takes his stuff and leaves. EXT. WILCOX LIQUOR STORE - DUSK Todd steps outside, reaches down to the ground and picks up his ragged, filthy blanket. He cracks the beer, takes a big slug, then walks south up Wilcox mumbling to himself. EXT. CORNER OF WILCOX AND SUNSET - DUSK Todd walks up to the corner of Wilcox and Sunset and waits for the light to change. The store directly on the corner is a Good Time Ticket Service with neon signs in the window reading in various colors: "Kings, Raiders, Rams, Angels, Dodgers, Lakers, Clippers." The colorful neon catches Todds eye and he turns and looks. His brow furrows as an important realization occurs to him. TODD Mr. Holman and Laura, standing and waiting for the light, both recognize the voice at the same time. They turn and look right at Todd, but aren't quite sure it's him he's such a mess. LAURA
MR.
H TODD Todd looks around suspiciously. Laura and Mr. Holman both start to laugh, grab hold of Todd and hug him. Over Todd's shoulders both their faces can be seen smiling, then both simultaneously wince at the strong aroma. They each take an arm and lead Todd across the street. Tears run down Laura's smiling face. MR.
H Todd goes along, his head wobbling and his eyes glazed. DISSOLVE TO: INT. NORTHWEST AIRLINES JET - NIGHT Todd's wearing some of his Dad's oversized clothes and sits in the seat on the plane between Laura and his Father. They both keep glancing at him with perturbed expressions. Todd is completely out of it. It's like he's had a lobotomy. Mr. Holman and Laura look at each other, neither knowing what to do. DISSOLVE TO: EXT. CHEBOYGAN - DAY It's summer in Cheboygan. The trees are thick with leaves, motorboats pulls water-skiers on the lake, kids play on the beach. EXT. HOLMAN HOUSE - DAY Mr. Holman drives a riding lawn mower across the large green lawn. His face is caught in a deep frown. INT. HOLMAN HOUSE - DAY Mrs. Holman walks up the hallway wearing a straw sun hat and carrying a pair of work gloves. She stops at a closed bedroom door. She brings her hand to the knob, then stops. She looks very upset. She speaks to the door. MRS.
H TODD MRS.
H TODD
MRS.
H She wipes her eyes with her knuckle and walks away. INT. TODD'S BEDROOM - DAY Todd's bedroom was last decorated during high school. There is a poster of Bob Lanier dribbling a basketball wearing a blue, red and white Pistons uniform. Todd sits on the bed wearing a T-shirt and jeans with no shoes staring blankly out the window. He is clean now, but still has a number of scabs on his face and arms. The sound of his Dad on the lawn mower can be heard approaching then receding. EXT. HOLMAN HOUSE - DAY An old, beat-up, blue Imperial pulls into the Holman's driveway. Mr. and Mrs. Holman both stop what they're doing and look. Chris and Dick get out of the car. They wave their hands as they walk across the lawn. DICK CHRIS
MRS.
H CHRIS DICK Mr. and Mrs. Holman don't know how to answer. MR.
H Chris and Dick both nod and head inside. Mr. and Mrs. Holman turn back to what they were doing with pained expressions. INT. TODD'S BEDROOM - DAY There is a knock at the door, but Todd doesn't look up or answer. The door opens and Chris and Dick enter grinning. DICK CHRIS Todd turns slowly toward them. He looks like he might say something, but doesn't. The wind is quickly knocked out of Chris and Dick's sails. DICK
Todd shows no sign of response. CHRIS
Todd turns back toward the window. TODD
DICK
Todd could care less. Chris and Dick look defeated. CHRIS
Dick gives Chris a dirty look. DICK Todd turns and look at them with a really ugly expression. TODD
DICK
Todd looks back out the window. TODD
DICK CHRIS They all go silent. Chris and Dick look at each other and make faces of helplessness. DICK CHRIS Todd doesn't say anything or turn around. Chris and Dick leave and shut the door behind them. EXT. HOLMAN HOUSE - DAY Chris and Dick come walking out. Mr. and Mrs. Holman step up to them looking a tiny bit hopeful. MR.
H DICK MR.
H DICK CHRIS They get in their car and back out of the driveway. Mr. and Mrs. Holman don't move. DISSOLVE TO: INT. HOLMAN HOUSE/DINING ROOM - NIGHT At the dinner table sits Mr. Holman, Mrs. Holman, Laura and Todd. No one speaks. Todd stares down into his plate, not eating. They all glance at Todd then look away. Nobody's got much of an appetite. DISSOLVE TO: INT. HOLMAN HOUSE/LIVING ROOM - NIGHT A cute, fat, six-month old baby crawls on the carpet in the living room. Ed sits on the floor with the baby. He glances at Todd who sits in the big easy chair staring at the floor. Ed turns and looks at Jeanine who stands in the doorway with Mr. and Mrs. Holman. Everybody looks uncomfortable. DISSOLVE TO: EXT. HOLMAN HOUSE/BACKYARD - DAY Todd sits by himself on a lawn chair staring blankly into space. Laura comes walking around the side lawn and crosses the backyard to Todd. She is smiling. LAURA Todd slowly looks up at her, then looks away without speaking. LAURA Todd doesn't move a muscle. Laura takes hold of Todd's arm and hoists him out of the chair. LAURA
Laura keeps hold of Todd's arm and leads him across the yard. He walks in a lethargic manner with his head down. EXT. WOODSY STREET - DAY Laura and Todd walk up very wooded street, the sun beams through the leaves dappling the ground in moving patterns. LAURA Todd doesn't answer, but his head is up and he's breathing deeply. They turn off the paved street onto a dirt road. EXT. DIRT ROAD - DAY As they walk up a wooded dirt road the sound of the freeway can be heard in the distance. Todd's head is moving around as he looks from one side of the road to the other. EXT. VACANT LOT - DAY They arrive at Todd's vacant lot. A good portion of the deadness has vanished from his eyes. TODD LAURA As they get to the hill Todd furrows his brow. Something's different. He looks all around. TODD LAURA TODD LAURA Todd looks around. TODD LAURA TODD LAURA
TODD LAURA
TODD LAURA
Todd's eyes widen in wonder. TODD LAURA
TODD Laura looks into Todd's eyes. LAURA
Todd feels light headed. Something hits him. TODD
Laura grins and takes Todd's hand. She leads Todd up the dirt road. As they come around the corner they see a car parked on the side of the road. Then another, then another and another. A whole line of them. Todd looks confused. Laura watches his face with devious glee. As they get past all of the cars they see a group of people seated in a clearing in the woods having a picnic. As they get closer Todd sees that he knows everyone: there's his Mom and Dad, Ed, Jeanine and the baby, Chris and Dick, Eileen, Aly, Sherry, Mrs. Gilhouley, Stan and Kelly Uplinger, Trudy and several others as well. Todd looks very confused as Laura, a big grin on her face, leads him over. Todd is hailed with a chorus of hearty "Hi, Todds" and "How ya doin's." Everyone lifts paper cups toward him. EVERYONE
Laura puts her arm around him. LAURA
Todd's mouth opens, but he can't speak he's so choked up. Laura sits Todd down. Ed hands him a paper cup and fills it with Vernors ginger ale. Laura looks around at everybody's grinning faces, then turns to Todd. LAURA
Tears are streaming down Todd's face. He doesn't know what to say. LAURA
EVERYBODY
TODD
LAURA
Everyone is smiling and listening intently. TODD
CHRIS
Todd stands. TODD
Todd begins to walk back toward the hill and everyone follows him, grinning and smiling. Todd uses his hands to indicate where things will go. TODD
When Todd reaches the top of the hill he is wearing a suit, tie and a construction hard hat and is leading a group of workmen. As the workmen go past they reveal a sign that reads, "This site developed by Holman & Company Realty." Todd stands on the top of hill, his hands on his hips, a satisfied look on his face. Laura steps up beside him. He puts his arm around her and pulls her close. Laura smiles and snuggles against him. Todd grins happily. "THE END" |
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