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CARL Janie takes Carl into the bathroom. 23A INT. BATHROOM -- DAY 23A Janie takes alcohol, cotton and gauze out of the medicine cabinet. Carl sits down on the toilet. JANIE CARL Janie starts to work on his bloody wound. The alcohol stings. Carl gasps, shutting his eyes. CARL JANIE Carl does as he's told. CARL Janie strokes the back of Carl's head. He slowly sits up. JANIE CARL JANIE Carl stands unsteadily, stepping out of the bathroom. Janie follows. 23B INT. JANIE'S LIVING ROOM -- DAY 23B Carl and Janie step back into the living room. CARL JANIE CARL JANIE JANIE CARL
CARL JANIE Carl look down at his wound, then notices a book on the bed. As he reaches over and picks it up his eyes widen. CARL JANIE CARL Carl turns to Janie's picture: she's a little girl with pigtails. CARL JANIE Janie takes a step back from Carl. JANIE
CARL Janie can't believe it, shaking her head. JANIE
CARL JANIE CARL JANIE CARL JANIE CARL JANIE CARL JANIE CARL JANIE CARL JANIE CARL He picks it up and goes to the very back, where all of the inscriptions are. Carl looks for a second, then points. There, among the many various-colored ink signatures, written in small letters, is: "Janie, I'm really sorry. C." Janie looks closer, then turns to Carl. JANIE CARL Janie looks at Carl, amazed. JANIE Carl look back with the light of an
idea dawning in his eyes. Carl takes hold of Janie's hand. JANIE CARL JANIE CARL JANIE CARL JANIE
JANIE CARL JANIE CARL JANIE CARL JANIE CARL
CARL JANIE CARL Janie looks him right in the eyes. JANIE Carl nods. Just then they hear a car drive up quickly outside. They both look out the window and see a turquoise Grand Am pull up. Patrick hastily gets out of the car. Carl looks at Janie. CARL There is a knock at the door. Janie opens it and it's Patrick. Janie asks Carl again: JANIE CARL Patrick looks from Janie to Carl. PATRICK CARL Patrick grabs Carl's shoulder and pulls him toward the door. PATRICK CARL JANIE 24 EXT. JANIE'S BUILDING -- DAY 24 Patrick leads Carl out of Janie's apartment, down the stairs and out beside the turquoise Grand Am. PATRICK CARL Patrick sighs, shaking his head. He looks around and opens the driver's door. PATRICK Carl opens the passenger door and gets in the car.
Patrick looks at Carl with a deadly serious expression. PATRICK
PATRICK CARL Patrick grabs the sides of his head like it might explode. PATRICK CARL PATRICK CARL PATRICK CARL PATRICK Carl shakes his head. CARL Patrick takes Carl by the shoulders, roughly. PATRICK Carl looks at the floor -- he sees a ten dollar bill and picks it up; it's covered with blood. CARL PATRICK CARL Carl looks at the bloody ten dollar bill, then turns looking back toward Janie's apartment. Our view recedes from Carl and Patrick in the car, goes back to Janie's building, up the steps, and returns to . . . 26 INT. JANIE'S APARTMENT -- DAY 26 Janie is just standing there, not knowing which way to turn or what to do. JANIE
Just then there is the sound of a car peeling away, Janie glances out the window and sees the turquoise Grand Am drive off. Janie looks confused as she walks over to the door, looks outside and doesn't see the car or Carl. JANIE There's no answer. Janie steps out of her apartment. 27 EXT. JANIE'S APARTMENT BUILDING -- DAY 27 Janie goes down the steps and looks around -- there's no one there. JANIE Still no answer. Very slowly she turns and heads back up the stairs and into her apartment, still wearing the over- sized, old letter jacket. 28 INT. JANIE'S APARTMENT -- DAY 28 There sits her packed suitcase. Janie shakes her head sadly. JANIE She takes off the jacket, tosses it on the bed, then very methodically proceeds to unpack her suitcase: blouses back on hangers, blue jeans, panties, and t-shirts back in their drawers. The suitcase goes back under the bed. Janie sits down on the bed, looks at the jacket, drops her head and quietly begins to cry. Suddenly, Janie's door flies open and there stands Carl, breathless. Janie looks at him in dumbfounded astonishment. CARL Janie is shaken up.. JANIE CARL JANIE Carl steps over and takes her hand. CARL JANIE CARL JANIE CARL JANIE
Janie looks truly shocked. JANIE CARL JANIE CARL Janie nods without a moment's hesitation. JANIE Carl takes hold of her around the waist, pulls her to him and they kiss. It's a good, long, warm kiss. CARL Janie looks around, then sighs and shakes her head. JANIE CARL Carl takes Janie's hand and they leave the apartment, shutting the door. Our view goes to the bed where the discarded letter jacket sits in a ball. THE END Copyright © 1996 Josh Becker, All Rights Reserved
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