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Immediately, it's Teddy on the offense circling the defending Marquis. They spend most of the first round checking each other out, throwing punches that the other blocks. The audience, like any crowd at a boxing match, starts to get antsy right away wanting to see a good fight. Teddy's compatriots still look highly doubtful. MARQUIS TEDDY Teddy fakes a punch toward the Marquis' nose. The Marquis raises his guard to block it, then Teddy lets him have a quick combination of punches: a right and a left to the Marquis' gut, then an uppercut to his chin, snapping his head back. The Marquis is momentarily stunned. TEDDY The Marquis shakes his spinning head, then bares his teeth. That got him angry. MARQUIS TEDDY MARQUIS TEDDY MARQUIS The Marquis attacks. He pops Teddy three times in the face with left jabs, then follows through with a hard right cross to Teddy's nose. Teddy sails backward landing on his rear. He reaches up to find that his nose is now bleeding. Gregor stands over Teddy and starts to count . . . GREGOR Teddy jumps to his feet and wipes his nose. As he moves back in for more, the Barkeep, with a pocket watch sitting on the bar in front of him, whacks a beer mug with a knife handle indicating the end of the first round. Teddy and the Marquis proceed to their neutral corners. Joe Ferris begins to massage the Marquis' neck. The Marquis turns to Ferris with a single raised eyebrow. MARQUIS Ferris hastily removes his hands from the Marquis' neck. Meanwhile, the Cowboys are busily cleaning Teddy up. They wipe the blood off his face with a towel, grabbing the bridge of his nose to stop the bleeding. Gregor looks to the Barkeep, who nods and clanks the knife on the beer mug. GREGOR Teddy and the Marquis step out of their corners and approach each other warily. Once again, Teddy circles the Marquis, taking the offensive. MARQUIS The Marquis attacks. In a flurry of fast jabs he pushes Teddy back against a chair, where he then begins to pummel him in the face. Teddy blocks most of the jabs, but at least one connects with his nose, and the blood starts flowing again. MARQUIS TEDDY MARQUIS The Marquis moves in on Teddy again, his fists flying. Teddy goes directly up between the Marquis' arms with a hard uppercut, slamming the Marquis' mouth shut, then follows through with a solid right to the Marquis' nose. He now sails backward onto his behind. Blood trickles from one nostril. The Marquis can't believe what's just occurred. Gregor steps up over him. GREGOR The Marquis shakes his head, then rises to his feet with as angry of an expression as has ever crossed his face. MARQUIS TEDDY The Marquis moves in, flailing away with his fists. Teddy suddenly looks like he's in trouble. The Marquis backs Teddy up against a chair and pummels him unmercifully in the face. With a mighty right cross the Marquis wallops Teddy in the side of the head, sending him sailing onto his face on the floor with a thunk. Everyone watching looks highly disappointed as Gregor steps over Teddy's body and starts counting . . . GREGOR The Marquis starts to strut like a peacock, his fists raised over his head. MARQUIS The Barkeep watches the sweep second hand near the twelve on the pocket watch. GREGOR The Barkeep rings the knife handle on the beer mug. GREGOR The Marquis drops his fists, looking exasperated. MARQUIS The Cowboys haul Teddy into his corner and throw a mug of beer in his face. Teddy blinks his eyes, wiping beer off his cheeks. Teddy attempts to flex his right hand. TEDDY
MARQUIS Teddy shakes his head, vainly trying to clear his vision. Everybody looks at him expectantly. Lincoln Lang, lying on a nearby table, holds his breath. Teddy gives his ringing head another shake. Gregor steps over him. Teddy looks up and there are two of Gregor. GREGOR Cowboy #1 takes hold of Teddy's middle two fingers on his right hand. Teddy pulls away hard, snapping his two broken fingers back into place. His eyes open wide and he gasps. Teddy rises unsteadily to his feet. TEDDY The Barkeep smacks the beer mug. Gregor raises his hand. GREGOR Teddy jumps to his feet and is out dancing around again, on the offense. The Marquis looks weary of the whole thing, but puts up his guard, stepping forward. They go around a few times, then Teddy unleashes a flurry of combinations and just won't stop: two in the gut, one in the jaw; two in the face, two in the gut. The Marquis is blocking a lot of them, but certainly not all. Teddy is indeed fighting like a bantam cock. Then, there it is, both the Marquis' fists are low as Teddy comes straight through with a good solid right cross. The Marquis spins around grabbing the back of a chair for support. He shakes his head, turns around and Teddy is right there with roundhouse into the Marquis' gut, followed by a left uppercut to the chin. The Marquis is momentarily stunned. TEDDY Teddy steps right up to him and in the most perfectly systematic way, uses every possible combination of punches, everyone a solid connection. A right to the belly, a left to the belly, a right to the temple, a left to the temple, back to the gut, a right, a left, a right, a left - how the Marquis remains standing is anyone's guess, that military training, no doubt - another right, another left, blood is pouring from the Marquis' nose and eyebrow. The Marquis' head snaps back and forth, blood and sweat spraying. Teddy keeps switching from gut shots to head blows, yet somehow the Marquis remains standing, his fists dangling uselessly at his sides. The onlookers are getting very excited, hollering and waving their fists. Teddy drops back. TEDDY Teddy lets the Marquis have a mighty punch to the nose. The Marquis spins around and crashes down onto a table, destroying it. He doesn't get up. Everybody cheers crazily, crowding around Teddy, raising his hands over his head. GREGOR The Marquis, blood streaming from his nose and various other cuts, is hoisted into a chair and revived. He points unsteadily at Teddy. MARQUIS One FROWNING COWBOY steps up to the Marquis and says . . . FROWNING
COWBOY The Groom from the Marquis' house chimes in . . . GROOM At which point everybody hoists the Marquis up over their heads, carries him to the door and tosses him outside. The Marquis lands headfirst in a snow bank. Everyone turns back inside, cheers and crowds around Teddy. Gregor and the Cowboys pour beer on his head. The Barkeep passes out free drinks. The Saloon Gal hugs Teddy and gives him a big kiss. Lincoln Lang looks on, smiling. Teddy grins toothily, then puts on his cracked spectacles. DISSOLVE:
Teddy, sporting a bruised face and two fingers in splints, closes up the Elkhorn ranch. Gregor helps Teddy load his few belongings onto a mule tied behind his horse. The rest of his men, including Lincoln Lang, whose leg is in a splint, stand around silently watching. TEDDY The three Cowboys all crowd around Teddy, shaking his hand and slapping him on the back. COWBOY
#1 COWBOY
#2 COWBOY
#3 TEDDY The three Cowboys all nod, wave and walk away. Teddy steps up to Gregor and Lincoln. TEDDY Teddy shakes Gregor's hand. Gregor's eyes water up. He turns away quickly, wiping away the tears. GREGOR Teddy steps up to Lincoln, who is balancing on homemade crutches. Teddy goes to shake Lincoln's hand. Lincoln drops his crutches and gives Teddy a big hug. Teddy hugs him back. TEDDY LINCOLN Teddy goes to his saddlebag and removes a slim book. He hands it to Lincoln. TEDDY LINCOLN TEDDY Gregor has regained his composure and steps up beside his son. GREGOR Teddy climbs up on his horse, then throws his hands in the air. TEDDY GREGOR LINCOLN GREGOR TEDDY Teddy climbs on his horse and rides off. Gregor and Lincoln watch him go. Teddy is a small man on a horse with a mule trailing behind, quickly receding into the vastness of the Bad Lands. DISSOLVE: EXT. TRAIN STATION/ CHICAGO - DAY The train chugs into the Chicago train station. Several REPORTERS wearing straw hats and holding pads stand in a group awaiting the arriving train. The Marquis, his face still cut, bruised and swollen, steps off the train onto the platform. The Reporters surround him.
REPORTER
#2 MARQUIS REPORTER
#1 MARQUIS The CONDUCTOR hollers . . . CONDUCTOR The Marquis tips his hat. MARQUIS The Marquis turns and goes back into
the train car. DISSOLVE: EXT. THE ROOSEVELT HOME - DAY A carriage arrives in front of the Roosevelt family home in Manhattan. Teddy peers out the window, his complexion looks weather-beaten and healthy. As he gets out of the carriage, holding a blanket-wrapped rifle, it obviously pains him just to look at the house. Nevertheless, he proceeds inside. INT. ROOSEVELT HOME/ FOYER - DAY Teddy enters the foyer to find his sisters and brother and uncles and aunts are all there to greet him, as well as Medora. They all part to allow a little three year old ALICE, Teddy's daughter, to make her way through. When she sees this unfamiliar man she stops abruptly, grabbing her Aunt Bamie's leg. Teddy squats down, holding out his hands. With a nudge from Aunt Bamie, Alice hesitantly approaches her father. Teddy's outstretched arms close around his daughter. He hugs Alice tightly to him. TEDDY Tears of joy stream down Teddy's ruddy
cheeks. The entire Roosevelt family smiles happily. As horse-drawn carts and wagons clip-clop past the Roosevelt mansion, a VOICE-OVER NARRATOR speaks. V.O.
NARRATOR DISSOLVE: EXT. JUNGLE PATH - DAY A path winds through the dense jungle. The steamy air is filled with the screams and caws of many birds. A TITLE READS: "Africa, 1896." The Marquis, looking much older and distinctly crazy, leads a parade of AFRICAN NATIVES along a jungle path. V.O.
NARRATOR Many more African Natives holding spears appear out of the jungle, surrounding the Marquis and his parade. The Natives with the spears move in on the Marquis ominously. DISSOLVE: EXT. AFRICAN VILLAGE - DAY V.O.
NARRATOR DISSOLVE: EXT. THE TOWN OF MEDORA/ PRESENT DAY - DAY In the present-day town of Medora, North Dakota there is in fact a small statue of the Marquis reposing in an empty lot beside a grocery store and a gas station. V.O.
NARRATOR EXT. THEODORE ROOSEVELT NATIONAL PARK/ PRESENT DAY - DAY We are looking at the entrance to the Theodore Roosevelt National Park. The majesty of the Bad Lands stretching out in all directions. V.O.
NARRATOR FADE OUT: THE END
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